I decided to ask a variety of students from my college, again about my second mock up of my music magazine front cover, contents and interview. The reason I decided to ask people specifically from my college is because they are in the age and social range of people who I indended the magazine to be for. The reason I decided to ask for more audience feed back was to get more opinions on how I could make my magazine better.
'I'm 17 and I think this magazine includes things I personally would want to see in a music indie magazine'
'I think the name of the indie music star needs to stand out more, it looks a bit boring and doesn't catch my eye'
'I think the plain white background on half of the content page is quite, well plain'
'The image used in the interview is really bold, the way he looks at you makes you want to read what he has said! And the fact his girlfriend is included in a picture is cute'
